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Studio session : Jane

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    Posted: 11 October 2018 at 14:33
Hi all,

Here is another studio picture taken with Jane

Jane by Fabrice, sur Flickr


She is a judoka and a friend, one of my very first model

let me know what you think of that picture

regards,

Fabrice
M35/2| 100/2| 100macro | S70-400G| 500/8 | Si180/3.5
Alpha7| Alpha 7R | Nex5| 16-35 |24-70| 55| 70-200G | 85/1.8 | 18-55| 55-210
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Post Options Post Options   Quote waldo_posth Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2018 at 19:49
This is a finely lit portrait. The play of light and shadows in the face and on the shoulder is excellent.

I am not so happy with her right leg - triggers the wrong association with me. As a viewer aware of the context (judoka) the clothing is not problematic. As an outsider, without that context knowledge I get another wrong association. I might be overly critical, though.

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Post Options Post Options   Quote maewpa Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 October 2018 at 07:47
I like the "look" very much and it is a very honest and frank portrait - maybe too "honest and frank" as I feel maybe certain lines and pockmarks are exaggerated by the light. I don't like the less important bottom part much and feel the amount of light down there is excessive. But yes, I like it... I do.
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