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Assignment #1: Rule of thirds and Golden Mean [2]

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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2013 at 16:40
plane and contrail perfectly placed, and a very nice minimalistic execution. A clear pass for me
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Post Options Post Options   Quote mikey2000 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2013 at 17:04
Thanks Pegelli!   Right, onto assignment 2...
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kienitz Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 February 2013 at 17:40
Here is my entry for the ROT! It was a nice sunny morning :)



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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 February 2013 at 07:19
Kienitz, it's a nice picture with nice light, but not a good demonstration of ROT.
One of the main subjects is supposed to fall on one of the intersections of the 1/3 lines:


So pls. try again.

Also to see the exif you need to log in, can you maybe pls. copy that into the post when you submit your next try?
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This is my photo with rule of thirds.


A Church by Dr_Rex, on Flickr

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Kienitz Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 February 2013 at 20:49
Ok... I failed last time because I didn't get it right. Lets see if this time I understood the ROT:



1/25   f/4 ISO 100 70 mm



1/40   f/4 ISO 100 35 mm
 



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Post Options Post Options   Quote bms44974 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2013 at 12:54
@Dr.Rex: Andrew, I'm not sure whether you intended the ROT to apply to the cross or the church since both are place at an intersection. The bulk of the church far outweighs the cross and minimizes the impact if your intention was to highlight the cross. Can you tell me what your intention was when taking the photo?

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Post Options Post Options   Quote bms44974 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2013 at 12:57
@Kienitz: Jonas, both are a pass. The first is certainly more definitive, but it is hard to miss the subject since it is the only thing in focus.

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Dr.Rex Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 March 2013 at 16:26
@bms44974,
I've tried to highlight the cross. But now I think it was not such good idea. It would be better to place upper-left intersection at the dome. What do you think about it?
Ok, I have another one photo taken for this assignment

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Post Options Post Options   Quote bms44974 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 March 2013 at 13:01
@Dr.Rex: That's a pass, Andrew.

Cheers... Brian

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While experimenting with my camera's "Hand Held Twilight" mode I decided to also take this picture for use in the Rule of Thirds Assignment.



The Beaver Bridge at Night

Camera: SLT A35 Lens: 18-250 Apeture:4.0 Focal Length: 24.0 Shutter Speed: 1/6 second ISO: 6400
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Post Options Post Options   Quote bms44974 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 March 2013 at 01:47
@Dash66: Welcome to Dyxum, Dave! And kudos for jumping into the assignments. The bad news... your entry is not a pass. On this assignment, we like to see a subject at one of the ROT intersections. The bridge itself is a bit high and spans both upper intersections. The geese might have been an appropriate subject, but were not on an intersection. The good news... you will have fun trying again.

Cheers... Brian

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Originally posted by bms44974 bms44974 wrote:

@Dash66: Welcome to Dyxum, Dave! And kudos for jumping into the assignments. The bad news... your entry is not a pass. On this assignment, we like to see a subject at one of the ROT intersections. The bridge itself is a bit high and spans both upper intersections. The geese might have been an appropriate subject, but were not on an intersection. The good news... you will have fun trying again.

Cheers... Brian


I looked at the photo again this morning and realized that it wasn't what you all were looking for in this assignment. Oh well, this gives me an excuse to go out and take more pictures tomorrow! :-)

Thanks for taking the time to evaluate it. I promise my next will work better!
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My first assignment:



Camera SLT-A77V
Focal Length 35mm
Shutter Speed 1/640 sec
Aperture f/1.8
ISO/Film 100
Taken March 8th 2013

Edited by Tonrow - 08 March 2013 at 21:21
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