NEW Basic Assignment #2: Leading lines |
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Berean ![]() Senior Member ![]() Assignment Graduate Joined: 16 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Devon Status: Offline Posts: 155 |
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![]() My submission for this assignment. As I understand it, lead-in-lines are meant to draw your eye to a focal point within the shot, or into the picture itself. I have attempted to draw the eye into the image by using the carpet, but also the arches, and have used the red to accentuate this. Hope it passes! Thank you. Ian. |
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Can't you see? It all makes perfect sense, expressed in dollars and cents, pounds, shillings and pence: Roger Waters.
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MiGPRADO ![]() Newbie ![]() Joined: 30 September 2006 Country: Spain Location: Spain Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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jvsanchez ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 04 October 2009 Location: Texas, USA Status: Offline Posts: 1543 |
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![]() here's my attempt. the split between the two halves of roadway leads the eye from the in focus dot, which is the subject, through the image back to the three OOF dots. This shot is also an evolution of another, older shot, that pegelli and some of the other mods and senior members have been helping me with in critic's corner. Thanks for that guys, i think it turned out great ![]() |
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- Vincent
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@jvsanchez: Vincent, for me this is a great example of the use of a leading line. Using it to break the ROT is very effective. As I recall from the Critics Corner post, this shot was cropped and rotated so, technically, it does not qualify for a "pass" on this assignment which encourages "through the viewfinder" compositions. Nonetheless, it's a great example of the objective of the assignment and a great image! TFS... Brian
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@MiGPRADO: Miguel, The line featured most strongly in this photo (the drain beginning at the lower-right) does not lead to the subject. The lines in the pavement serve the proper purpose of a leading line, but they are overwhelmed by the stronger lines leading into the distance. Please have another go at this one.
Cheers... Brian |
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jvsanchez ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 04 October 2009 Location: Texas, USA Status: Offline Posts: 1543 |
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actually, it's a new shot altogether. here's a quick comparison: Original shot from 2 weeks ago: ![]() EXIF: 1/125, f/5.6, 100 ISO, +0ev, multi-seg metering; 1/10/10, 17:32 New shot from this past Sunday: ![]() EXIF: 1/160, f/5.6, 100 ISO, +0ev, multi-seg metering; 1/24/10, 17:48 additionally, here's a link to my flickr page where you can see that the filenames assigned by my A200 are different, and the photos are separated by about 250 images. am i correct in thinking that since these are in fact different images, the one i submitted for this assignment would be a pass? (also, the shots in the critics corner area were totally different images too) |
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- Vincent
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@jvsanchez: Yes, indeed! Thanks for the clarification. It was difficult to tell without the embedded Exif. Cheers (and PASS!)... Brian
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Berean ![]() Senior Member ![]() Assignment Graduate Joined: 16 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Devon Status: Offline Posts: 155 |
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bms44974, would you be in a position to cast an eye over my submission, please? Bottom of page 2. Thank you. Berean.
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Can't you see? It all makes perfect sense, expressed in dollars and cents, pounds, shillings and pence: Roger Waters.
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@Berean: Sorry for the delay in response. Your shot has a strong leading line but it's difficult to tell if your subject is the alter or the window. Both are out of focus, and while this is a desireable thing in some situations, it doesn't seem to be helping you in this photo. Please have another go at this one and give weight to both the line and subject. Cheers... Brian
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mambo ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 13 September 2009 Country: Canada Location: Winnipeg Status: Offline Posts: 2098 |
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Here is my attempt.
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Berean ![]() Senior Member ![]() Assignment Graduate Joined: 16 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Devon Status: Offline Posts: 155 |
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![]() Brian, a resubmission, but different photo! Hope this is better. Regards, Ian. |
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Can't you see? It all makes perfect sense, expressed in dollars and cents, pounds, shillings and pence: Roger Waters.
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@mambo: You have some strong leading lines, Charles, but the subject is rather small and indistinct. Pieter (pegelli) had some comments for Minoltista on the previous page that seem appropriate here as well:
Cheers... Brian |
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@Berean: One of the assignment rules states:
"no mining, shots must be specifically taken for the assignment." Given the attire on the figure in the background, I suspect that this shot may have been taken during a balmier season ![]() As for the leading line, this is fairly good example. I know you'll understand if I ask you for another. ![]() |
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Berean ![]() Senior Member ![]() Assignment Graduate Joined: 16 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Devon Status: Offline Posts: 155 |
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Ha, ha, ha! I've been caught cheating ![]() |
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Can't you see? It all makes perfect sense, expressed in dollars and cents, pounds, shillings and pence: Roger Waters.
A700, Sig 10-20, 17-70, 70-200, Min 24-85, 28, 50, Vivitar 100 macro, HVFL 42AM |
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