NEW Basic Assignment #5: Shape/outline Silhouette |
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 35126 |
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That's a pass Stinus, the sun flare adds a nice bonus to the picture.
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Dudger ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 07 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Manchester UK Status: Offline Posts: 304 |
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Heres my 1st attempt at this one - hope its not too busy for the desired affect ? - shot today - slightly straightened and therefore cropped plus autolevels brightened the sky - hope thats not cheating.
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Dave
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@Dudger: Dave, I think you have answered your own question. Technically, it's a silhouette, but the assignment reads: Take a picture that accentuates the outline of a person or object, try to create an extra impact by making the shot idealistic, simplistic and perfectly executed.
All the detail in the structure distracts from the outline and keeps the image from taking on the "idealistic" and "simplistic" qualities expected for a pass. Please try again. Cheers... Brian |
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Dudger ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 07 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Manchester UK Status: Offline Posts: 304 |
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Yep, Understood.
I also took this today at a different location - also slightly straightened and therefore cropped - had a lot to do to get rid of the fact that my sensor is filthy, and levels sorted the fact that my longer lens is pretty poor - hope it manages 'idealistic and simplistic' - if not then its probably me thats a bit simple ![]() Edit = Oops - needs more PS work on the mucky sensor - Sorry... ![]() Edited by Dudger - 10 March 2010 at 22:21 |
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Dave
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@Dudger: That's a pass. You have quite a few clipped highlights in the clouds. A lower exposure would have worked better for you here. Cheers... Brian
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Dudger ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 07 January 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: Manchester UK Status: Offline Posts: 304 |
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Thanks Brian
I think ill work on it a bit in PS and replace the dodgy version (Thats why i didnt post it as my first attempt) - tho i have to say i prefer the Pit head as an image ![]() |
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Dave
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jvsanchez ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 04 October 2009 Location: Texas, USA Status: Offline Posts: 1543 |
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here's my attempt(s)
#1 Ocean Beach Pier in San Diego, California, at sunset ![]() EXIF: f/8; 1/200; 200 ISO; 18mm; A200; multi-seg metering #2 Detail of the pylons supporting said pier (this is not a crop of #1... it's a separate picture) ![]() EXIF: f/8; 1/500; 200 ISO; 120mm; A200; multi-seg metering |
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brettania ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum factotum Joined: 17 July 2005 Country: New Zealand Location: Auckland Status: Offline Posts: 20650 |
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Vincent
#1 is a definite pass and is a good shot (it may have benefited by having the horizon either higher or lower); #2 is also a pass but I like it less because it is not so well composed. You may move on to your next choice. |
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goldsmid ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 08 October 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 56 |
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Below is my submission for this assignement. THoughts?
ISO: 200 Exposure: 1/200 sec Aperture: 10.0 Focal Length: 100mm No Cropping, Little adjustment ![]() |
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@goldsmid: Very effective silhouette. That's a pass. Perhaps you could share how you set this up. Cheers... Brian
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goldsmid ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 08 October 2005 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 56 |
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I am glad you like the shot and it is a pass. It is actually a found shot and it is not completely a set up. I went to a local Glass factory to see what I could capture and in their store found the following bird statues that hang on glasses:
At the entry of the store they had one of the statues sitting on a glass right in front of a light fixture with a white rectangular plastic shade. The shade had a great effect where it was bright in the middle and then became darker to the edges. I locked in my exposure metered off of the bright part of the light, crouched down to get an angle where the bird head was relatively in the center of the light, and then shot some test shots varying the exposure compensation. I adjusted until I got the desired balance of the bird silhouette and the glass edges showing up. I was shooting with the Sony 100mm Macro. The final shot was at 1/200s, 200 ISO, f/10, EV +2, 100mm, RAW, handheld. I increased the contrast slightly in the final picture, but there were no other edits. |
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defi90 ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 18 December 2008 Country: United Kingdom Status: Offline Posts: 303 |
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Hi,
I think it's a weak try. I did it a couple of weeks ago looking for an other assignment and when I looked up I thought it would be perfect for this one... ![]() Cheers Misi |
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bms44974 ![]() Moderator Group ![]() Assignments Deputy Joined: 18 October 2008 Country: United States Location: Cary, NC Status: Offline Posts: 5096 |
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@defi90: I like the photo, Misi, but I'm not sure it works well for this assignment. Some similar entries have been turned back because the of the intricate detail in the subject (see my response to Dudger's first try above). The silhouette is also broken by the reflection off the top of the ascending girder. Please try again.
Cheers... Brian |
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defi90 ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 18 December 2008 Country: United Kingdom Status: Offline Posts: 303 |
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Hi,
2nd try. ![]() Cheers Misi |
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