NEW Intermediate Assignment #1: High Key |
Page <1234 17> |
Author | ||
Kakaku ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 15 July 2008 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 352 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
Thanks Pegelli. I very much appreciate the constructive criticism. I now notice it as well.
![]() I just hope I don't cause my baby seizures from all the bright flashing lights. ![]() |
||
![]() |
||
woodrim ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 19 October 2009 Country: United States Location: Charleston, SC Status: Offline Posts: 1961 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
Does this qualify as high pass?
![]() |
||
Regards,
woodrim |
||
![]() |
||
pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Online Posts: 35119 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
woodrim, nice shot but I don't think it's hi-key.
Look at the histigram in the right top: ![]() Almost as many tones below 128 as above. I think the pose and scene has potential to become hi key, but you need to find a combination of exposure and PP to make it so. Hope this helps |
||
You can see the April Foolishness 2022 exhibition here Another great show of the talent we have on Dyxum
|
||
![]() |
||
Pschitt ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 22 January 2008 Country: United Kingdom Location: Switzerland Status: Offline Posts: 83 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
My modest high-key contribution : Celine
![]() C&C weclome ! Edited by Pschitt - 12 January 2010 at 19:19 |
||
![]() |
||
pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Online Posts: 35119 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
Very nice Pschitt, excellent portrait with a great viewer connection and truly high key without anything being overly blown out. Only her eyes and some very small shadow ares in her hair provide the very little dark foundation. A clear pass and looking forward to more of your assignment contributions.
|
||
You can see the April Foolishness 2022 exhibition here Another great show of the talent we have on Dyxum
|
||
![]() |
||
wolfgerb ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 13 January 2009 Location: Austria Status: Offline Posts: 358 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
this was actually a concert shoot, with a burst of light coming out of the background all of a sudden:
![]() |
||
NEX 7 + Kit Lens, Sigma E 30/2.7, Sigma E 19/2.8, Sony 85/2.8 ,Min 20/2.8, Min 28/2, Min 35/2, Min 50/1.4,
Tamron 28-75/2.8 and Lensbabies |
||
![]() |
||
pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Online Posts: 35119 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
wolfger, I like it a lot, it's clearly overexposed (which is OK for some styles of high key) and has a good impact due to the almost symmetrical composition and the lady looking to the slightly larger half. If I'd have a C&C it would be that the dark areas are all quite grey and misses a bit of pop. However no question it's a pass so looking forward to your next assignment contributions.
|
||
You can see the April Foolishness 2022 exhibition here Another great show of the talent we have on Dyxum
|
||
![]() |
||
wolfgerb ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 13 January 2009 Location: Austria Status: Offline Posts: 358 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
thanx Pegelli, I can clearly see your C&C. I have one version which pops more, but decided
to post this one, because for my taste this one has more atmosphere. thanx for the pass. wolfger |
||
NEX 7 + Kit Lens, Sigma E 30/2.7, Sigma E 19/2.8, Sony 85/2.8 ,Min 20/2.8, Min 28/2, Min 35/2, Min 50/1.4,
Tamron 28-75/2.8 and Lensbabies |
||
![]() |
||
alphatini ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 10 November 2009 Country: Canada Location: Québec Status: Offline Posts: 658 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
![]() edit to show exif : 28 mm F2.8 ISO 3200 1/8s no pp Edited by alphatini - 17 January 2010 at 03:33 |
||
|
||
![]() |
||
MiPr ![]() Admin Group ![]() Mikre Dyxum Administrator Joined: 25 August 2006 Country: Poland Location: Wroclaw Status: Offline Posts: 22013 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
Alphatini, I think that your photo has nice composition. "Direct" eye contact really adds to the photo. That's pity her eyes are not tack sharp. Another problem is that your photo is overexposed - the high key photo must be exposed properly, i.e. skin tones should be normal. The key to high-key photography is to take a shot in light surroundings in bright light but the photo should be properly exposed.
For example imagine a bride in white wedding dress on some light background. On such photo you would like to get properly exposed face, hands, etc. And that would be classic high-key photo. |
||
I'm noise-blind. And noise-about-noise-deaf too ... | BTW, Dyxum Weekly Exhibitions don't grow on trees ...
|
||
![]() |
||
brettania ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum factotum Joined: 17 July 2005 Country: New Zealand Location: Auckland Status: Offline Posts: 20650 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
@ Etiene
I don't believe that your portrait is enhanced by the high key treatment you have used and it shows that it is harder to use high key effectively with a brunette subject. Your model's face is not treated "kindly", and what is more the pose results in the eyes suffering (her head should have come around a bit as well to open them up). Another try is called for on this one. |
||
![]() |
||
pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Online Posts: 35119 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
@ alphatini (and MiPr) This article has been linked before and has a good description of hi-key and is worth reading. The key aspect of high key (no pun intended) is the fact that most tones (except maybe a very few to create an outline) are well into the upper half of the histogram. There's high key styles that use overexposure as well as normal exposure but it's the general very light and luminous atmosphere and light background that is the common denominator.
So "technically" your picture is meeting this definition of high key, however as pointed out there are some other aspects that don't give it an emotional impact that we look for when passing the assignment. Hope this helps. |
||
You can see the April Foolishness 2022 exhibition here Another great show of the talent we have on Dyxum
|
||
![]() |
||
MiPr ![]() Admin Group ![]() Mikre Dyxum Administrator Joined: 25 August 2006 Country: Poland Location: Wroclaw Status: Offline Posts: 22013 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
From the article you linked above:
Edited by MiPr - 24 January 2010 at 10:23 |
||
I'm noise-blind. And noise-about-noise-deaf too ... | BTW, Dyxum Weekly Exhibitions don't grow on trees ...
|
||
![]() |
||
pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Online Posts: 35119 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
Also from the same article:
So high key images can be overexposed, but fully agree that just overexposure will not yield a high key image. |
||
You can see the April Foolishness 2022 exhibition here Another great show of the talent we have on Dyxum
|
||
![]() |
![]() |
Page <1234 17> |
Forum Jump | Forum Permissions ![]() You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
This page was generated in 0.063 seconds.

Dyxum.com - Home of the alpha system photographer
In memory of Cameron Hill - brettania
Feel free to contact us if needed.