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bms44974 
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 Posted: 10 July 2010 at 00:03 |
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@rsjaffe: That might make a nice silhouette, but it's not low key. The background should be obscure and very dark with low illumination on the subject. Please try again.
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rsjaffe
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Posted: 10 July 2010 at 01:54 |
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Ironically enough I was initially went to this statue to take silhouette pictures, but thought that the reflections would disqualify it as a silhouette.
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bms44974
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Posted: 10 July 2010 at 02:12 |
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@rsjaffe: It very well might have.
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Posted: 10 July 2010 at 02:17 |
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bms44974
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Posted: 10 July 2010 at 19:15 |
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@rsjaffe: You don't get high marks for composition, but the low key aspects of the photo are well done. That's a pass.
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Posted: 24 July 2010 at 06:34 |
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can anybody show me a pic of a low key pic taken outdoors with no flash
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Posted: 24 July 2010 at 08:41 |
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ulyshut
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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 09:05 |
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my first attempt to low key thanks
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shoot shoot shoot makes perfect
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brettania
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Posted: 24 August 2010 at 12:22 |
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@ uly
The T-shirt is letting your shot down. The shirt is not the subject and should be dark (or even white). It also seems more strongly illuminated on the shoulder than the subject. There's also a distraction (a tablecloth?) in the top left corner. Please try again. |
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Posted: 25 August 2010 at 08:15 |
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thanks for the comment bret ill try again ^^
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shoot shoot shoot makes perfect
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Posted: 29 August 2010 at 10:02 |
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2nd attempt
my High School friend 
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Posted: 29 August 2010 at 20:10 |
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ulyshut, I think the dark clothing of the subject is much better, however the background (especially the white blob at her right) spoils the low key character. So pls. try again.
I liked the composition of your previous shot better, this one is too central, and you can easily crop some from the top. |
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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 02:23 |
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thanks pegelli for the critics and comment ill try again ^^
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Posted: 30 August 2010 at 05:52 |
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wanted to do this assignment outside with natural light
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crop no 1 on the right side, no. 2 on the left. what do you think? |
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