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pegelli 
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 Posted: 15 May 2010 at 17:10 |
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emmarky, I think the shot is more about reflection than symmetry, maybe if you would have cropped off the bottom and made the horizon go through the middle it could be symmetry as well but for this version it's not there yet. So pls. try again.
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Posted: 16 May 2010 at 11:00 |
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Doh,
Knew i should have started with the basic asignments.. Thank you very much for looking. (until next time then) 
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Posted: 16 May 2010 at 20:45 |
But first you need to finish this one, once started you must pass to try another one (see the rules on page 1) 
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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 16:39 |
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I'm not quite sure if this one works for this category and if not I will stick it somewhere else.
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brettania
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Posted: 22 May 2010 at 03:33 |
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The even spacing of the rivets in the main support do show symmetry. Consider that a pass.
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Posted: 05 June 2010 at 13:32 |
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pegelli
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Posted: 05 June 2010 at 15:06 |
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I think #1 has too many non symmetrical distractions (gravestones), but the second is a royal pass for me. Very nice composition and play of lines. Also the similar shapes coming back in the darker ceiling behind the pillar works very well.
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Posted: 05 June 2010 at 15:27 |
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Thanks for your comments. Still trying to get my eye to see the same thing as the camera... 
So i guess i can start planning another assignment now then? |
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Posted: 05 June 2010 at 19:14 |
Yep, that's cxertainly a good possibility. |
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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 05:27 |
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my 1st attempt on this assignment
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shoot shoot shoot makes perfect
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pegelli
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Posted: 23 June 2010 at 08:13 |
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I think I would have allowed the asymetrical background, if the shape in the foreground would have been "perfect", however since it's a bit crooked the total doesn't feel far enough for a pass, so pls. try again.
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 20:21 |
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take 2 ^^
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pegelli
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 21:08 |
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Much better symmetry here ulyshut. Also the two assymetrical elements (the person and the sahdow) emphasise it even more and don't distract from it.
Only thing I would have done is made a perspective correction, so the building doesn't lean back, however I won't hold that against you and it's a pass. |
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Posted: 24 June 2010 at 22:16 |
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yes.. thanks for the comment pegelli and the pass, i learn a lot from you, and your eyes in seeing this are great... keep it up.. on to my next assignment ^^
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