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Post Options Post Options   Quote Dudger Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 April 2010 at 15:46
No Problem Pegelli
- went out today and did one small and one large pattern - hope at least one of em is good enough :)

Incidentally - this is probably the only time in my life i will ever be able to take the small pattern image without the distaction of Contrails :)

Small Pattern


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Two passes

I like them both, but also have two nits:
In the first: If you would have taken a small step to the left all the cages would have stood free from the beam of the adjacent one and made the picture a bit stronger.
In the second: The sunlit wood on the right is burned out a bit, if shot in raw a small -EV grad filter there would have really helped the balance of the picture.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote Dudger Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 April 2010 at 20:01
Good points Pegelli - thanks
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I would like to try "patterns" now so here it goes. I am attempting 2 shots with this try. Thanks...




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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 May 2010 at 17:08
@ dalaman, I think these are more texture than pattern (even more than your texture pass ) so pls. try again with a different and more straight take on a repeating pattern. The first is closest (not there yet) and the second I can't see a strong enough pattern in there.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote dalaman Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 May 2010 at 19:04
One more simple shot for your assessment. It probably could go for a texture look also but I think a pattern is present. Do you? Thanks!

 



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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 May 2010 at 09:51
Very good dalaman, there is texture but the shot is really driven by the pattern left by the mowers in the grass (at least that's what I think it is). Another pass will be chalked on the board for you.
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Quality of lines can create patterns.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 May 2010 at 14:59
Nice shot Aperture73, the pattern is quite subtle but still enough for a pass. Looking forward to your next assignment submission.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote ulyshut Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2010 at 16:29
i'll try mine for this assignment..
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Here's a try at it - hope it fits the requirements:

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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2010 at 19:56
@ ulyshut, works very well, nice perspective distorted pattern with a pleasing "break" by the lighted window. A pass for me.

@JS, not a lot of pattern, but very dominant in the picture and therefore a pass. Only nit is the pincushion distortion (visible at the top) that keeps distracting me a bit. Important to correct in PP if you would ever consider printing the shot.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote JS Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2010 at 20:35
Thanks pegelli - I didn't really notice the pincushioning - I thought it was an effect of the waves in the pool.
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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 June 2010 at 21:49
Originally posted by JS JS wrote:

I thought it was an effect of the waves in the pool.


Yeah, the water bulging even more, but that's reality. When you look at the edge of the tiles at the top and see more from them in the middle than in the corners, and being so close to the straight border it caught my eye.
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