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dalaman ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 26 April 2010 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 785 |
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Here comes Part "A." Not much of a shot but does it pass?
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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Yep, passed as far as I can tell. You can post all three parts (A, B and C) in one post or as three different posts. Your choice.
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dalaman ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 26 April 2010 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 785 |
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Here is Part B My backyard
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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Part B you passed with flying colours, well done.
Part C, sorry to say but I like the first shot better than the second. The second has a much busyer background (sidewalk/driveway). I can see why you added the shadow of the postbox, but for me the background spoils it. So can you try part C again? |
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dalaman ![]() Senior Member ![]() Joined: 26 April 2010 Location: United States Status: Offline Posts: 785 |
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Part C, 2nd try
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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Ok dalaman, I consider that a pass, 2nd shot is more attractive and has more "depth" to it. So you've now successfully completed all parts of "perspective", well done.
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Maddmack ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 18 September 2009 Country: United States Location: mill valley ca. Status: Offline Posts: 78 |
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how does this workassignment 4
![]() MOD EDIT, Found your smugmug gallery, this is how the post should look (normally), pls. use "post options/edit post" or "quote" to see how the syntax should be written. Part A: 300 mm: ![]() 20 mm focal length, center crop: ![]() Edited by pegelli - 04 June 2010 at 06:13 |
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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@ Maddmack, pls. read this post carefully about posting images. I have the feeling you're doing some things that are incorrect as well as allways linking back to the thread which isn't needed.
![]() Also for this assignment part A we're expecting at least 2 images and I only see 1, so impossible to give a verdict on that. EDIT after editing your post @ Maddmack, that's a pass for part A, only difference is resolution and sharpness, but the perspective is exactly the same. Looking forward to your parts B and C Edited by pegelli - 04 June 2010 at 06:15 |
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moo-ha-ha ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 23 March 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Posts: 51 |
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Here is my attempt at this assignment
Part A [1] 200mm, f/11, 1/320s, ISO400 ![]() [2] 24mm, f/11, 1/320s, ISO400 ![]() Part B [1] WA @ 24mm, f/7.1, 1/60s, ISO200 ![]() [2] Normal @ 35mm, f/6.3, 1/100s, ISO200 ![]() [3] Tele @ 105mm, f/5.6, 1/160s, ISO250 ![]() [4] Normal to match WA @ 35mm, f/5.6, 1/80s, ISO200 ![]() [5] Normal to match Tele @ 35mm, f/5.6, 1/60s, ISO200 ![]() Part C [1] 50mm, f/10, 1/250s, ISO200 ![]() [2] 50mm, f/10, 1/250s, ISO200 (moved approx. 10 feet to right) ![]() Mayur |
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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moo-ha-ha, only noticed this today, sorry for responding late.
I think part A and C are flawless and will pass. I think you also executed part B technically by the book, but by choosing a flat object you kind of missed the intent of part B, which is that if you have the main subject framed the same between WA and Tele that the major difference is the relation of the subject vs. the background which is absent in the way you took the shots. So pls. repeat part B with a more 3-dimensional scene where you can clearly see the differences in relation between the subject and background as you change focal length (and position) |
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moo-ha-ha ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 23 March 2010 Country: United Kingdom Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Posts: 51 |
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Thanks pegelli, No need to apologize as I am in no hurry to go anywhere...
![]() I had a feeling about Part B; I knew that very slight transparent background on these shots was not going to be enough for the purpose of this assignment. But in my defense, I forgot the assignment instruction print-out at home while I was away taking photos and I shot Part A and C from memory. After I came back home, I just shot my front door and hoped that you would not notice, but you caught me... ![]() I learned my lesion; there are no short cuts in photography... ![]() Once again, thank you very much for your time and comments, much appreciated. I will re-submit Part B soon... Edited by moo-ha-ha - 07 June 2010 at 12:17 |
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Maddmack ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 18 September 2009 Country: United States Location: mill valley ca. Status: Offline Posts: 78 |
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pegelli ![]() Admin Group ![]() Dyxum Administrator Joined: 02 June 2007 Country: Belgium Location: Schilde Status: Offline Posts: 39007 |
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How did you do:
First of all on the assignment, you passed part B. You can clearly see (between the first and the last, and between the 3rd and 4th) that even though the subject is about equal size that the perspective (relation to the background) is changed due to your position change. Second on the posting, near flawless, only one time [/IMG] too many after the first picture, but that's not really important. |
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Maddmack ![]() Groupie ![]() Joined: 18 September 2009 Country: United States Location: mill valley ca. Status: Offline Posts: 78 |
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part c
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28-135 4-4.5 sony 70/300G 300.HS white f4 500 f8 |
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