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Here comes Part "A." Not much of a shot but does it pass?
This is the 200mm shot.

This is the 28mm shot cropped.
 



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Yep, passed as far as I can tell. You can post all three parts (A, B and C) in one post or as three different posts. Your choice.
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Here is Part B My backyard



and Part C - Me and my shadow


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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2010 at 08:37
Part B you passed with flying colours, well done.

Part C, sorry to say but I like the first shot better than the second. The second has a much busyer background (sidewalk/driveway). I can see why you added the shadow of the postbox, but for me the background spoils it. So can you try part C again?
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Part C, 2nd try

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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 May 2010 at 19:48
Ok dalaman, I consider that a pass, 2nd shot is more attractive and has more "depth" to it. So you've now successfully completed all parts of "perspective", well done.
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how does this workassignment 4[/IMG] i hope i got the posting correct


MOD EDIT, Found your smugmug gallery, this is how the post should look (normally), pls. use "post options/edit post" or "quote" to see how the syntax should be written.


Part A:
300 mm:


20 mm focal length, center crop:


Edited by pegelli - 04 June 2010 at 06:13
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@ Maddmack, pls. read this post carefully about posting images. I have the feeling you're doing some things that are incorrect as well as allways linking back to the thread which isn't needed.

Also for this assignment part A we're expecting at least 2 images and I only see 1, so impossible to give a verdict on that.

EDIT after editing your post

@ Maddmack, that's a pass for part A, only difference is resolution and sharpness, but the perspective is exactly the same. Looking forward to your parts B and C

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Here is my attempt at this assignment

Part A
[1] 200mm, f/11, 1/320s, ISO400

[2] 24mm, f/11, 1/320s, ISO400


Part B
[1] WA @ 24mm, f/7.1, 1/60s, ISO200

[2] Normal @ 35mm, f/6.3, 1/100s, ISO200

[3] Tele @ 105mm, f/5.6, 1/160s, ISO250

[4] Normal to match WA @ 35mm, f/5.6, 1/80s, ISO200

[5] Normal to match Tele @ 35mm, f/5.6, 1/60s, ISO200


Part C
[1] 50mm, f/10, 1/250s, ISO200

[2] 50mm, f/10, 1/250s, ISO200 (moved approx. 10 feet to right)


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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 June 2010 at 10:38
moo-ha-ha, only noticed this today, sorry for responding late.

I think part A and C are flawless and will pass.

I think you also executed part B technically by the book, but by choosing a flat object you kind of missed the intent of part B, which is that if you have the main subject framed the same between WA and Tele that the major difference is the relation of the subject vs. the background which is absent in the way you took the shots. So pls. repeat part B with a more 3-dimensional scene where you can clearly see the differences in relation between the subject and background as you change focal length (and position)
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Thanks pegelli, No need to apologize as I am in no hurry to go anywhere...

I had a feeling about Part B; I knew that very slight transparent background on these shots was not going to be enough for the purpose of this assignment.

But in my defense, I forgot the assignment instruction print-out at home while I was away taking photos and I shot Part A and C from memory.

After I came back home, I just shot my front door and hoped that you would not notice, but you caught me...

I learned my lesion; there are no short cuts in photography...

Once again, thank you very much for your time and comments, much appreciated. I will re-submit Part B soon...

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Post Options Post Options   Quote Maddmack Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 June 2010 at 00:17
my part B
20mm
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35mm

100mm

35mm@ 100 view

35mm @ 20mm view

I don,t care if i pass this or not, the fact that i posted this with no help is good by me,thank you for all the help. by the way how did i do.


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Post Options Post Options   Quote pegelli Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 June 2010 at 06:19
How did you do:
First of all on the assignment, you passed part B. You can clearly see (between the first and the last, and between the 3rd and 4th) that even though the subject is about equal size that the perspective (relation to the background) is changed due to your position change.

Second on the posting, near flawless, only one time [/IMG] too many after the first picture, but that's not really important.
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part c




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